Hope you guys like my a some work.Start reading from bottom pls.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Sunday, August 23, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hey Gracie,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this writing. I love that you listed your adjectives, it makes me think that you are really thinking about your learning goals. I am glad that the man was okay after his crab bite. Have you thought about challenging yourself to use some interesting sentence starter words?
Have a great day,
Mrs M
Thank you
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