Friday, September 3, 2021
My fathers day song
This is a song for my dad for fathers day.Its kind of like you are my sunshine but different lyrics.Hope you enjoy my song.By readers!
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi Gracie. Thanks for posting your Writing on your blog. I think you made a great decision to start with a tune you knew before writing your lyrics. Maybe it would have been a good idea to write each line of the song on a new line (like a poem). Did you know that if you put this on your blog like a slideshow your readers would be able to play the YouTube clip in the background while they read your song words?
ReplyDelete