So for reading we are pretending to be news reporters from our summery and heres mine its about the queen.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, November 5, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Great work Gracie! I love how you have a frame around your video so it looks like the real tv news. Next time practise reading through your summary a few times so that you know it a little better. Maybe try and have the book that you are reading from by the camera so you are looking up in that direction rather than looking down. Good work on your summary Gracie!
ReplyDeleteNice job grace! I like how you put so much hard work into your work and like the breaking news maybe you could put more deatail and but anyways buybuy
ReplyDeleteThanks mrs jones and josh they are very nice comments ill look on your blog and comment.Have a nice day.
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