I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, August 10, 2021
Sam Dickson Athlete Profile
Today i finished my sam dickson athlete profile and i have some facts to tell you about him.I think i did good by adding as much information and not just doing information like sam dickson plays rugby.I write it well.What i could do better next time is write about someone else and add some puctuation because i need to learn it.Hope you enjoy my work dont forget to comment by readers.
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