I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, August 6, 2021
Violet Walrond
Today i finished my Olympic champion profile about Viloet Walrond and theres some facts that could help you with anything that you might want to know.I think i did good with my work becase it was a bit hard trying to reserch some things so i could do this.Next time i can try and make some pucttuation to try and make my work better.Did you know? that viloet was only 14 when she got selected to swim at the 1920 antwerp games!.Hope you like my work hope it gives my some information.Dont forget to comment.
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