I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, August 9, 2021
My Writing Today
Today in writing i had warm up slides and i have been choosen to be a blogger of the week and heres my work that im going to show you.I think my writings good because i have put quility senteces in and have put the word of the day in.Next time i can add some more word of the day and put some more writing in.I like my writing mostly because i write it like i was the bird in real life and it souds like a true story.I like writing because most of the time you use your imagination so its fun to imagine what your going to write.I am excited for you readers to read my writing hop you enjoy reading my imagination.Bye readers!.
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Kia Ora Gracie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work!
I like the way you have included what you like about writing and how you are good at it.
I agree with your next steps with adding the WOD more and maybe having a goal of writing more.
I look forward to reading your next blog post.
Thank you ☺️
Miss Lauder